Lacks heart
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By Nessland10
This is well written, but it lacks heart. The plot just spiritlessly trots along and the characters don't really establish themselves. To be compared to the witty humor Julia Quinn or Heyer bring to their characters is a disservice to the readers, as this is not a good book for lovers of the genre. I can’t even muster the energy to continue to list the reasons why this is not a good book. However, I will mention that the last part in the book in particular needed more revising—filling in. If you are just dipping your toe in this genre this is a good enough book to read.