Hose me down anytime
4
By Fine pumpkin 511
That was deliciously delightful. I enjoyed the banter between Pick, great name by the way and Sarah Jo. Every woman should love a strong hot firefighter to protect her. He’s strong, brave, and sensational. What a guy. I’m intrigued to find out how Hunter and Lola’s story began so I’m definitely looking forward to reading it.
Hot!
4
By Aedriftboy
If you’re a delicate flower....still read anyways! Has hot, direct in your face interactions with likable characters and a great HEA without a cliffhanger. Love me a hot alpha male that wants to Start you on fire and puts out the fire over and over again!
No conclusion
1
By straighttalker198
There’s no plot or “bad guy”. The ex boyfriend who is a deputy is just bitter about the breakup. The deputy didn’t really do anything or pose a threat to Sarah in the book. A girls/boys inner demons aren’t enough to make a plot for a book. Literally all the inner dialogue a character in the book is them fighting their insecurities. There always needs to be a physical bad guy. The book can’t be completely a battle of the mind, or else it’s just a journal or monologue.
Good story, but lots of cursing
3
By Kitchkin
The colorful language was excessive enough I almost stopped after the first few chapters. The story was good, but it would have been more enjoyable if the language was toned down.