Surprising the Billionaire with a Baby

Julia and Monty are just too funny for words and the hot scenes are hot, hot, hot!

Pros: •Adult themed scenes were descriptive and were a mix of Fantasy & Realistic scenarios. •Jami Cons: (oh boy…) •Endless tug and pull to unreasonable demands/opinions by Julia. (Someone who we’re supposed to root for has opinions 90% of the average person would disagree with. Ie: Being 30 years old and not wanting a job.) •Unrealistic conversation between people. If you ever played that app Episodes, it’s like that. As if they were writing it as they thought it, and then submitted it calling it a novel. •Both leads are insufferable: -Monty has a weak spine and is a complete wimp despite also somehow being a powerful business man? -At times you root for him because of how badly Julia is written. -Julia, I don’t even know where to begin with. A complete hypocrite, pathetic character development, to say immature is an understatement, zero hobbies accomplishments or personality other than liking s*x (she even talks about wanting to screw Monty at her sons birthday which is really questionable by the writer.) and the way she speaks I kept having to remind myself she’s 30 years old, and not 16. •Using the “Miscommunication” story arc is hard to accomplish without it getting boring/infuriating to the reader to the point they don’t finish the book. This was one of those times it was used to the point it was infuriating and I caught myself skimming every chapter after 100 pages. •ZERO chemistry. •In the end I was rooting for the antagonists, and not the protagonists. -10/10 -story 8/10 -adult scenes

Shallow, plot, and characters. I tried to like it, but I just couldn’t. PS sex doesn’t fix a poor plot. Felt formulaic man plus woman plus sex plus conflict plus sex= story. Beginning of the story was different. Again unrealistic and shallow. Felt rushed.

Too immature and shallow.

Not worth the read

Story started out well. Got a little boring in places. Need to remember names of people, they are mentioned and than they are never mentioned again for several chapters.

There is absolutely no depth to the characters, the sex jokes from the FMC stall her character development completely.

Honestly when I read the blurb for this I thought it would be really good. But after reading it it’s just a really bad book. It failed to hold my attention multiple times. I tried to read it all the way through but ended up skimming a lot of it. I didn’t even read the end because I was really over it. I also didn’t like the fact that it went to them being trapped to the next chapter it’s 9 months later and she had the baby. Also I felt the two leads really didn’t have any chemistry their conversations were just very bleh. The whole book was honestly bleh. It felt like this was the authors first book. She can write really detailed sex scenes but everything else was crap

The book started out very promising. I love how the author set the stage for the flow of the book. However, I was very disappointed. The book was written horribly and the story was so plain. It was one of the worst books I have ever read. It just got worse and worse; there was nothing that I would say I enjoyed.

Not a single character in this book aside from jami was remotely interesting. This was written like a badly acted adult film, and somehow crude and inappropriate humor was used in place of any interesting conversation. The two main characters had zero chemistry, and no real conversations but for some reason we’re supposed to be rooting for them? Monty is a tech billionaire but he’s kind of just dumb? And Julia is annoying, acts like a spoiled child and has zero personality aside from dirty jokes. No one in these books speaks like anyone I’ve ever met in my entire life. There’s bad grammar on top of it all. I really wanted to read Hamish and Jamis book but after reading this one I have zero interest in paying money for these books.