And There Were No Cars on the Road

We want to know why.

It was a good story. If he made it longer, it would have bene better. Its in desperate need of a editor. I have a feeling he wrote it quickly and didn't even proof read it.

I hate giving poor reviews, because you already did more than I could have. If you wanted to keep it a short story, you still could have with a dozen or so more page. It reminded me of an "Urban Legend" that didn't have enough suspense. I needed to be scared and curious a little while longer. With a couple of more incidents before he met his demise you would have been on your way to something really good. Keep on writing, you have the potential for 5 stars.

Great book just left wanting more. You need to write a full book or a sequel to this book.

Very interesting straight to the point.

Short, but interesting!

This story was really good. It was a very short quick read. It's great for just being in line waiting for something. It's great(: I wish it was longer!!

Loved it! I want more!

Woh, I liked this but I want more. Just as it got good, it ends!!

Liked how the author made you feel like you were getting to know the character and then …