The story was decent enough but the repetition of the same words over and over and the grammatical errors really took away from it.

So tired of all the stories that have one hero instead of people working together. Super women instead of complimenting each other. As for serial killer stories let's see who can kill the most people. The next serial killer will have more deaths to out do this story. Do all writers take courses and are told what to write? It as if you read one you read them all. At least no swearing and not X-rated. Fran Fran