All of the spelling and grammatical errors ruined the story. The use of plural nouns instead of singular possession and vice versa, words that sound somewhat similar but aren’t spelled the same and then just random words out of the blue that make no sense whatsoever completely ruin the flow. As for the characters, I didn’t care for Price or Lenore. I found them both to be hollow and uninteresting. Neither was someone I could invest emotion in. The cousins were much more engaging and the side characters provided more insight to the story than the main characters.